Friday, 31 August 2018

The Storm

The Storm
The storm is a lion chasing you,
Deadly and evil,
Its flies slowly beyond the view,
A massive gray rhino in the distance,
A crackling stepping noise
Stepping on everything in its way
Eating buildings in rain
Tough and untameable
Stormy shouting and all-out of its mind
Livid savage and heavy


By jayden


By

1 comment:

  1. Anonymous21 September 2018 at 12:47

    Hi Jayden It's me Ollie I like when you used the two adjective deadly and evil. I suggest you to add more detail to your line's but great poem also good photo. I can picture the storm that you described in your poem.

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. 
Positive - something I have done well.
Thoughtful - a sentence or more that  lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)