I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Tuesday, 28 May 2019
I am David Description
I am David Description
In my imagination David has brown hair with blond streaks with frightened blue eyes and scars and teres in his clothes he is wearing blue chinos and a yellow t-shirt and also has scars on his body.
He is as tall as a normal kid but he is a little skinny because he doesn't get enough food he is worn out because he hast to work all day with pail white skin and is always tired .
I think that he hast to move big rocks, coal or logs and other stuff.
By Jayden
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